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几个加快SCI论文撰写速度的小窍门

www.editsprings.com | 2019/04/30 11:06:03  | 551 次浏览

平常读文献的时间,假如发明很好的句子句式,都市记录在一个文档内里,以下面的一段话,便是我在一篇文章的择要中发明的:

This paper describes the concept of sensor networks which has been made viable by the convergence of microelectro-mechanical systems technology, wireless communications and digital electronics. First, the sensing tasks and the potential sensor networks applications are explored, and a review of factors influencing the design of sensor networks is provided. Then, the communication architecture for sensor networks is outlined, and the algorithms and protocols developed for each layer in the literature are explored. Open research issues for the realization of sensor networks are also discussed.

文章用词忌重复,中文云云,英文亦然。特别是动词的应用,如在一段话中涌现了几个沟通的动词,觉得文章就落价很多,而假如用了几个意义邻近而又贴切的词,天然就会减色几分。如上文中的describe,explore,provide,outline和discuss,就使得文章有了文彩,值得进修和珍藏。保持采集例句,素材多了,天然本人的造句的时间就有根本了。另外,还要注重,在采集例句的进程,跟着例句的增多,也需要对例句举行收拾整顿和分类,便利进修和检索。

二是注重行文中Transition words的应用。Transition words就是在行文过程当中,连贯意思相干句子的词,如Therefore,thus,in particular等等。应用这些词,会使得文章连贯性好,逻辑性强,读起来一气呵成,天然会给审稿人好印象。上面是一个对于Transition words的一个总结,供列位虫友参考:

Transitions Study Sheet

Transitions for time:before, afterward, after, next, then, as soon as, later, until, when, finally, last, meanwhile, during, at times, sometimes, oftentimes

Example: WWII broke out in Europe in 1939.During this time the United States remained neutral.It wasn’t until 1941, after Japan bombed Pearl Harbor, that the United States entered the war.After its entry, it was only a matter of time before the Allies defeated Germany and the Axis powers.

Transitions for place:

in the background, in the distance, beyond, behind, above, below, in front of, elsewhere, in the middle, to the left, to the right

Example:My favorite painting is Botticelli’s Birth of Venus.In the middle of the painting stands Venus, the Roman goddess of love, standing on a seashell.She floats majestically above the beautiful water below her.To her left a figure representing wind blows fierce clouds of wind in her direction.To her right a figure behind her attempts to cover her with a blanket and protect her.It is a truly breath-taking piece of art.

Transitions for examples:

for example, for instance, as an example, like, specifically, consider as an illustration, that is, such as, similar, similarly

Example:Oftentimes people who study from history fail to learn from the mistakes of the past.For example, during WWII Hitler decided to invade Russia just before wintertime.This decision was the same decision Napoleon made over a hundred years earlier, and Hitler’s army met a similar fate.Had he learned from his history, Hitler might have avoided making this costly mistake and the outcome for the war might have been different.For instance, if Hitler had decided to invade England by sea rather than Russia by land, he might well have won the war.

Transitions for emphasis:

chiefly, equally, indeed, even more important, in particular, most important, without a doubt, indubitably, unquestionably, definitely

Example:Without a doubt, Chinese food is one of my favorite cuisines.Although I find Japanese and Thai food equally delicious at times, Chinese food is definitely my favorite Asian cuisine.In particular I enjoy the spicy Szechuan style of cooking commonly found in Chinese food.

Transitions for restatement:

in short, that is, in effect, in other words

Example:When I asked my girlfriend to marry me she said, in effect, that she wouldn’t be ready for marriage until after she completed her PhD program.At first I was crushed, that is, I felt like she said no because she didn’t love me anymore.However, after she explained her reasons to me I felt better and agreed with her.In other words, I came away feeling better than I had anticipated.

Transitions for comparison:

similarly, likewise, also, the same as, different than, opposite, unlike, instead

Example:When my older brother was deciding where to go to college he spoke to my father about where he should go.Not surprisingly he went to the same school my father did, MIT.When it was time for me to choose a college I did the exact opposite.I didn’t ask my father where I should go, and as a result, I didn’t also go to MIT like he and my brother did.Instead I went toUCLA.

Transitions for concession:

although, of course, admittedly, true, doubtless, granted that, no doubt, indubitably, without a doubt, definitely, certainly

Example:Some people might be surprised to learn that the two most successful NBA teams of all-time are the Boston Celtics and the Los Angeles Lakers.Although neither of these teams is very good right now, they are the two teams with the most champions in NBA history.The Celtics definitely had the best streak of these two teams; winning eight championships in a row at one point.Admittedly there is always the chance that some future team could break this record, but this seems unlikely.Of course no one can predict the future with any certainty.

Transitions for consequence:

thus, so, then, it follows, as a result, therefore, hence, consequently, accordingly, because

Example:I’m sorry, but I can’t let you turn in your homework late because it wouldn’t be fair to the other students.As a result your grade has dropped lower and you are now failing the class.Consequently you need to get 100% on the final so you can pass the class and then graduate from CAS.Therefore, I suggest you study very hard so I don’t have to fail you.Good luck!

Transitions for conclusion:

to sum up, in summary, finally, therefore, thus, in conclusion, to conclude

Example:Finally, Beijing has a lot of nice places to shop that appeal to tourists.To sum up then, Beijing is a wonderful place to visit because it has beautiful parks and historical monuments, friendly people and lots of nice places to shop.Thus any travelers who are planning to come to China should definitely visit Beijing during their stay.

Transitions for addition:

furthermore, in addition, besides, next, first, second, moreover

Example:UCLA is a wonderful university to attend as an undergraduate.First, it is respected academically and is well-known for its high standards of education.Furthermore, UCLA has a strong network of alumni who often recruit students to come work for them.Moreover students who do such work as undergraduates often receive jobs with these same companies once they graduate.In addition to these two benefits, UCLA also has exciting sports teams that are fun to watch.Besides, with so many good reasons to go to UCLA, why would you want to go anywhere else

咱们写文章时间,很自然会想到一些中文抒发要领然则经常苦于找不到贴切的英文抒发,查电子辞书每每进去的句子也是脸孔全非。我的一个教训关于来自cnki.net的例句就得当心点,这些都是海内兄弟写的文章中的句子经常不是适宜。

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